Over at False Machine, a 'dungeon poem challenge' has been set. I've been toying with some ideas for this, and they at least demand an airing - though I doubt they entirely offer 'the condensation of utility, beauty, meaning and originality into a functional and interesting micro-adventure. '
Without further ado.....
The Sodality buildings are principally of dull brick, partially sunk in the earth. The shape of the complex has been masked by flowerbeds, mounds and dense thickets. Thin chimneys and skylights are set into the buildings. Glazed tiles cover many of the surfaces.
Aviscaputs, the bird-headed are neither unknown nor common to the local area.
A1 An entrance hall, with hatstands, fire-place and a long sideboard covered in crockery (some of it quite valuable). Two screens isolate one corner of the room.
The kestrel-headed Raptora Uexkull waits behind the screens. She is very calm and will remain very calm, because she is pointing two flintlock pistols at you. (These are weapons of her own making, and have curving talons on the butts). She refers to Monedulus as 'Little Clerk' with exaggerated contempt.
Her aim is to get you to surrender your weapons, and go to meet Tietjens to decide what to do with you.
A2 The kitchen. A comfortable, warm room with a large gilt samovar providing tea.
The wren-headed Iolanthe Wrenfield is trying to play cribbage with Patrick Hooke. This is not going well; Hooke is intimidated by her beak and is distracted by thoughts of his lover, Brand.
Iolanthe is trying to distract Hooke, and make his stay all the happier. She will offer newcomers black tea laced with rum, and offer spritely conversation.
Patrick Hooke is a strung-out man who has suffered a wreck on the river. Tietjens has decided that he cannot leave the Sodality until the week is out, as part of the ritual. He cannot play cards.
A3 A wood panelled room, with several large desks; numerous books lie about the room in careful piles.
Hoopoe Tietjens stands at a lectern; piles of paper surround him. The several pillars are studded with long paper strands - invocation, notes, more. Lanner Coningsby is probably lounging somewhere nearby.
Hoopoe Tietjens had the head of a Hoopoe; everyone else is in awe of his crest and long beak. He is the master of the Sodality and will insist on you staying on for the rites (he is reluctant to use force, but may do so all the same). He will offer you tawny port and thin biscuits, and ask searching questions.
Tietjens is worried by the conduct of Vansittart but has a number of issues that concern him to attend to before then. In his lectern are a number of rare scrolls - these are magical and spiritual dialogues, of startling interest. He carries a long hunting dagger.
Lanner Coningsby contrasts a practiced languidness with the sharp eyes of a falcon. He is tending to an incense-burner and will chime in with the odd bon mot in response to Tietjens or anyone else who comes in.
A4 A reception room with several ornate chairs; an iron balcony overlooking the river. The tiles in the room depict the life of a female saint, culminating in her death in a marketplace.
St John Goldfinch is here, apparently talking to Clemency Yaffle. She is watching him carefully, whilst pretending to read.
St John Goldfinch has the head of a goldfinch, and is perpetually trying to groom himself. He is remarking upon the folly of casting the lots to arrange the rites.
Clemency Yaffle dislikes Goldfinch. She is headed like a green woodpecker and carries a fowling-piece in a duffel-bag.
B1 A sandy cove, with the remains of a boat.
B2 The Egret-headed Dalziel sits on the riverbank, apparently sketching in charcoal. He has exaggerated the forms of the bridge between A4 and B3 to rococo hideousness. He does not wish to be interrupted, and can get quite sharp. If pressed overlong, he may attempt a show of force.
B3 Antechamber dotted with stools. The double doors into the grand hall are shut.
The guilliemot-headed Urgulanilla Guillemot is consuming a platter of marinated herring. She will attempt to draw in newcomers under her (metaphorical wing) asserting her generosity and the folly of Tietjens. She will offer you a glass of thin white wine laced with rowanberry schnapps, and is unwilling to take no for an answer.
Picador Vansittart is a magpie-headed man, apparently attached to a large pink gin. He is engaged in contemplation of an engraving, showing a nobleman of antiquity drinking from a cup shaped like a dragon.
Vansittart wishes to alter the rites of the Sodality in his own image. He will happily debate the age and antiquity of the Sodality, and the folly of his colleagues.
B4 Dormitory, divided by screens into two sections. It overlooks the river; two bathing-places have been sculpted from the riverside.
Gymkhana Dabchick sits at a dressing table, apparently contemplating an ivory statue of a hermaphroditic faun. She will happily tell your where she found it, and some of the cultural connotations of the coitusgeist.
Hilarion Ptarmigan is dozing in the sunlight by the bathing place. The ptarmigan-headed man will wake if you approach, and ask what time supper is. By him is an empty plate and half a bottle of Madeira, which he will not offer to share.
C1 The great hall has been cleared of furniture: several paintings of mythic or allegoric scenes remain on the walls.
C2 Three trapdoors lead out of the great hall into a vestry. Long racks for clothes and storage chests abound. An altar in one corner contains ritual cleansing paraphernalia
C3 A concealed storage room where the furniture of the great hall has been placed. One coffer contains a quantity of silver plate, including a salt-cellar in the shape of a peacock.
The Rite of the Sodality
Over several evenings, the Sodality will conduct their rites. This involves a hymn to the Unknown God, followed by a series of dances and dialogues featuring a cast of distantly allegorical figures.
This begins and concludes in the great hall, but ranges through-out the sodality.
Actions during the Rite
Outsiders may witness the Rite, but must remain silent.
Picador Vansittart and Urgulanilla Guillemot will try to disrupt proceedings by forcing Sodality members out of character. Both may make deliberate mistakes, impertinent remarks or veiled seduction attempts. Minor magics are available to them.
Vansittart has obtained a exotic sabre as part of his costume. He may threaten others with this; he has not yet decided if murder will accomplish his aims.
Hooke on his own is a target for the disruptors. If Hooke and Brand are united, they will put up a better defence (both afterwards will share a horror of birds).
A List of Sodality Members
Together with their roles in the Rite, loose personality sketches and bird heads.
- Hoopoe Tietjens. [Hoopoe], Lamp-lit King, Generous, Intelligent but Inflexible
- Picador Vansittart. [Magpie], Brimstone Cavalier, Innovative and Vicious
- Raptora Uexkull. [Kestrel], Maid in Red, Vivacious and Bloodthirsty
- Iolanthe Wrenfield. [Wren], Grandmother of Dragons, Kind but oblivious
- Lanner Coningsby. [Lanner falcon], Brass Councillor, Irreverent and sardonic
- Urgulanilla Guillemot. [Guillemot], Ash-Wife, Hedonistic and commanding
- St. John Goldfinch. [Goldfinch], Reluctant Knave, Unfocused and arrogant
- Clemency Yaffle. [Green woodpecker], Armed Ploughman, Dogged and unsubtle
- Gymkhana Dabchick. [Dabchick], Velvet Burgher, Overfamiliar and earthy
- Monedulus Alleline. [Jackdaw], Kindly Death, Worrisome perfectionist, loyal
- Egret Dalziel. [Great white egret],Wasted Prelate, Envious, scrupulous
- Hilarion Ptarmigan. [Ptarmigan], Messanger, Apathetic, gluttonous
Why are you at the Sodality?
- A vintner has sent you to them with the matter of an unpaid bill.
- The carpenter's wife hints darkly to you of their strange goings-on.
- You know a wizard who will pay for the corpse of an Aviscaput.
- Pavo Esterhazy has sent you to them with a letter of recommendation.
- The local priest has asked you to take a message of goodwill.
- A fisherman has lent out a boat, and it has not yet been returned.
Six Concepts in the Literature of the Rite
- Repentant silence
- The imminent and eternal desert
- The sword in one hand, the trowel in the other
- A timeless rose
- Transcendental sight through constant purification
- The constant note of horror and squalor
Costumes from the 1883 Cambridge Greek Play, Aristophanes' The Birds. |
All images found here. |
See here http://falsemachine.blogspot.com/2021/02/the-poem-dungeons-revealed.html#comment-form for comments and critique on the Sodality.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting! Tell me a bit about your creative process Solomon
ReplyDeleteSo, as indicated on False Machine the Rite draws on a loose set of ideas from the verse and drama of TS Eliot. (The very word Terpsichorean has perhaps its most recognisable use in Eliot's Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats, which is not a thematic reference, but is relevant in a sort of crossword-clue type sense). Why are they dancing at all? As a sort of deliberate artpunk note, to fit the terms of the exercise - this isn't a mass, or a witches' sabbath or anything of that nature: it is deliberately a less-voiced affair. The Characters of the Rite do not exactly match the members of the Sodality, but they do allow underlying Good/Evil conflicts to be played out as social convention is removed by inhabiting a whole other set of roles.
DeleteEliot's mysticism is blended into a fraught social setting. Everyone's a bit on edge, no-one quite agrees what should be happening. Names are deliberately a little over-exaggerated and arch (the man with the head of a Hoopoe is called Hoopoe!) with a string of literary references.....though these are less important than a certain euphonious quality to the names themselves.
"Why birds, Master Wayne?" Well, I appreciate an emphasis on nature in my games. The adventurer must deal with the heat of noon, the isolation of the wilds and the dark of the woods before they reach the dungeon. An emphasis on types of birds is a nugget of the natural that can be implicitly expanded to the setting as whole. It was a relatively late addition and so responds in part to the idea of Conceptual Density (http://udan-adan.blogspot.com/2016/11/conceptual-density-or-what-are-rpg.html) - asking myself what haven't I added.
They are bird-headed not (literal) bird people, hence Aviscaput. The birds of Aristophanes are less of an inspiration than the costumes and the comic image of silly bird-heads repeating the more serious bits of Four Quartets. Of course, Hooke and Brand (who have probably wandered in from a nearby Hitchcock film) don't see it that way at all!
There's probably more, but I'll leave that there for now.
It is impressive work, and most inspiring. Thank you fo the sharing
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